As I said during the week we definitely need to treat the titles in some way - potentially give them a filmic effect - so they look different from the headlines. Also either have NAT SOT on all or none of it and I suggest none of it Except when the hockey ball hits the net as that seems a good punctuation point.
Gareth you looked much more confident this week, it looked like you'd been presenting for years so well done.
Jake - what was the first shot on your package? Not only did it appear on the news piece but it's also on the Sportsweek piece too. That's just lazy editing.
I think the issue with the commentary in the reports is that the commentarybis too short. I wasn't quite sure why it didn't work to begin with but if you are going to do spoof comms then you need to do two lines and not one. It'll all look less deliberate if you do it that way. The edit between Winchester's first effort and Totton's second goal doesn't work and the shot is too long after the 3-0 goal.....
There's more to follow but I am just about to take off....will be back asap.
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